The presentation seemed to go really well (I will include this as a link later) and I received some pretty constructive feedback. The font seemed to go down a treat, my only suggestion was that when I display it, I should separate my upper and lower case and display them separately. I have already tried this as I was curious to see how this looked however I didn’t find it more effective. This is because some of my lower case letters are directly influenced and inspired by the upper case and separating them makes it hard to distinguish this. It is a shame but I am glad I investigated this first. Most of my criticism was towards the Infographic which I am quite glad of as I overlooked a few issues with it. Some of my colours were too dark on the black background; particularly the greens and purples. Fortunately this is an easy fix as all I needed to do was select a brighter colour. I have selected a brighter green and have replaced my purple with orange. The orange I feel is much better as orange is quite a popular chalk colour for chalk boards.
Another important criticism is that my character doesn’t really show movement in the infographic. To combat this, I aim to spend the final week before hand in making this character a few more positions to variate between. Some of them are fine as is however the one which has him moving with the shooting star could easily adopt some form of Super Man-esque position. We shall see how this goes before hand in.
Checklist:
Change green and purple text colour
Create more Einstein’s in different poses
Try putting lower and upper case separate
Amend letter A, it didn’t save last time
Remove circle from bag mock up
Check for anything missing
Double check vectors on different formats